Exquisite Danger – a review

Exquisite Danger is the second part of Smoke and Swan’s story and the second book in the Iron Horse MC series. As such, it cannot be read as a stand-a-lone. For my review of book one, click here.

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Blurb:

For the first time in my life I know what it’s like to be completely and truly adored by a man who loves me for exactly who I am, a high functioning autistic with more personality quirks than there are stars in the Texas Hill Country night sky.

Some people think my boyfriend, Smoke, is a total biker psycho, a natural born killer who will destroy anyone who threatens what he considers his. They wouldn’t be wrong, but he’s so much more than that. He’s my dark salvation, my beloved fallen angel who is trying with all of his wicked heart to save me from what seems like an entire world bent on either killing me or a fate worse than death.

We’re headed to the Denver, Colorado chapter of the Iron Horse MC, chasing after my narcissistic, junkie mother who decided to steal from some very bad men leaving her two daughters behind to pay the price for her betrayal. My twin sister, Sarah, old lady to the Iron Horse MC president, is looking for my mother as well, but Sarah’s gone rogue and has no one to guard her back which worries me deeply. To further complicate matters, there are traitors in the Iron Horse MC who are working with my mother, not only helping her to escape but also informing my enemies of my every move.

The odds are stacked against me, but I will do whatever is necessary to protect those I love, and with Smoke at my side, I just might make it out of this mess alive.

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Oh man. I loved some things about this book. Getting to see more of Smoke’s POV is awesome. I think it gives the book more balance and I really liked getting both leads’ perspectives throughout the story. In this book particularly, Smoke’s very complicated psyche needed some exploration and I thought his generally steadier thought processes helped to balance out Swan’s frenetic, jumpy POV. It was also fun for Smoke’s scarier side to come out to play. I love how gentle he is with Swan – she is incredibly fragile and insecure in some ways – but the last thing a writer wants is her audience doubting whether the badass Master at Arms biker is really all that intimidating…. he definitely is! Do not get on Smoke’s bad-side.

Unfortunately, I didn’t think the plot was as strong as the first novel. Most of “ED” was about the identity of the Iron Horse traitor but to the reader, it is painfully obvious who is at fault. This is one of my biggest turnoffs in any type of entertainment and unfortunately it is persistent in this series. I almost wonder if the author is playing some sort of end game, because on her social media sites there is a pretty clear consensus on which secondary character is the traitor but she is is continuing to play dumb and carry over the “ruse”. It annoys me and I hope she ends it soon, and gets back to the good stuff.

The second point that drew me away from the story is the overly dramatic nature of some scenes. I felt that the characters just went from one super dramatic situation to another, to the point that these actions scenes felt like fluff.

This meant that IMHO, there was less deep content than there was in Trouble, when I had been hoping Mayburn would build on it instead. The scene between all the different factions (MCs and mafias and bratvas) in particularly was so overdone that it lost all meaning, for me at least. These men are all supposed to be so terrifying that you can’t help but laugh and shake your head. They just cancelled each other out whereas if it had just been the Boldin Bratva, I would have probably been shaking in my boots.

The book is solid and if I had read it first, I probably would have rated it higher, but after the stellar start in Exquisite Trouble, “Danger” was a bit of a let-down. I love this author so it was disappointing and surprising. Still looking forward to the series continuation though! And it was great to finally meet Sarah. Her and Beach’s story will be released this winter in another two-parter.

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